Wow, I'm not sure what you could improve - I think it looks great for your first time. While it's true the flowers look a little off, I don't see that as a big issue and I love the double moon. Although I must admit her shadow puzzles me - what's lighting up her side and why is the contrast so sharp? But still, I love the wall (purple's my favorite color), so great job!

It's interesting how she's in focus, but her background isn't. The table and chair are a little odd, especially with the table's tilt, but it's nice.

Beautiful doesn't begin to describe it. The light behind her is wonderful, but it looks odd with it's slashing, but it really is nice. Oh, and maybe if the blue wasn't solid? Maybe darkening around the light in the center it would look better.

Wow, the coloring is brilliant, but don't you think... it's a bit gothic or something?

Good job! This is nice, but it's also kind of creepy. I mean that in a good way, though, if that makes sense.

It's very pretty, and her happiness has a genuine feel to it, but the glows dots look too systematically placed. What I think is the bottom of her dress appears as an orang blur, and I can't decdies if her hair is like that because of wind, or she's twirling. But she looks like she's standing still. But it is a nice wall, I'm just being picky.

Positively gorgeous with the simple color contrast and they seem to glow with emotion.

It is bright, but it's very pretty, but I think a bit more detail would be great.

Very sensual, and comanding in a way. I think it may be how confident she looks.

Everything is so well-blended, the image flows wonderfully - it almost looks like she's dancing in her own way.

It's gorgeous. The coloring is wonderful, while the images themselves are positively ethereal.

It's a very sweet picture, nice and delicate, but almost not real, like it's from a dream or a hazy fantasy world.

very nice, she appears like she's drifting downward into the light, but it looks like she's in a broken eggshell. Which, I happen to think, is a cool addition.

Very romantic and fluttery, it all just seems to float. But what does the text say in the window?

The background is nice, but her expression is slightly weird and her appearance isn't very clear. It's still okay, though.

The look on her face is priceless...

She looks very sweet, and it appears that she is creating the rings around her while the background pattern adds a faintly mysterious touch.

I like how the ribbon is wrapping around her and the background looks electrified. Brilliant coloring.

Wow, reminds me of a Lolita grim-reaper. Very nice.

Anemone is my favorite character as well, and the background is pretty, but does it say anything? It appears to form something, but I'm not sure if I'm imagining it or not.

Very interesting and I like the duality of it, but the characters aren't defined that well... It still has appeal, but nothing seems solid, if that makes sense.

This is amazing! I want to see the OVA, because I'm a huge fan of the game, I think I've played it through 13 times. I'm assuming the show will eventually have the other playable characters from the game, so will you be making a wallpaper that includes them as well?

Misa Amane, the second Kira from the series DeathNote...ah, my favorite current manga, and possibly my favorite character combined with my favorite color. I adore the swirling background, it's awesome.

I've never seen the anime, but I have read the manga, and this is a lovely wallpaper, is somewhat oddly done. But that makes it unique, so it's okay.